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Rose The Killer Part 1Come to me....
Come to me my child...
 
"NO!" I yelped, sitting up suddenly in my bed. My blankets were on the floor, my skin was beaded with sweat, and my breathing was as rapid as my heartbeat.
"What is it? Whats the matter?"
My bedroom light suddenly flicked on, revealing my father standing in the doorway, a startled look on his face.
"I-Its nothing... Just a nightmare." I sighed, squinting in the bright light. Dad just nodded and walked over to me, sitting on the edge of my bed.
"You know, your mom and Liu have been getting nighmares too... Im worried about it."
I nodded sleepily. "Yeah..." They were always waking up in the middle of the night screaming.
"What happened in your nightmare?" He asked gently. I shivered.
"It was scary... someone was... No, something was calling me to come to them, over and over again. But it wasn't anyone I knew. The voice was the freakiest part... it sounded so unearthly. I couldn't see anything but I could feel that so
An Illegal Trade GT Ch.2The girl gasped between sobs and gazed into my eyes with pure bewilderment. “But, why?”

She was so freaking adorable… I couldn’t help but stroke her trembling back with my thumb. It felt so strange yet so amazing to feel something so small against my fingertips…

“You did nothing wrong,” I breathed. “I can’t explain why I did this- you wouldn’t understand----“

“I know what this is!” she bawled. “Y-you- you drugged me then you raped me- and when that wasn’t enough you shrank me so I could be some---some---!”

I moved my forefinger to her stutter
An Illegal Trade GT Ch.1An Illegal Trade

“How much?”

Zeke raised his golden eyebrows in surprise. “What?”

I folded my arms across my chest, and let out a patient sigh. “How much? For the girl?”

Zeke let out a large puff of smoke out of his cruel lips, and grinned wickedly. I could see the three of his golden molders, shining back at me- mocking my pained expression.

“You want her that much eh?” he chuckled- it was a terrible sound.

I nodded impatiently and placed my clammy hands onto his wooden desk. “How long has she been unconscious?” I ask suddenly.

Zeke shrugged and looked at the tiny girl’
Karasu - Part 16
Though the satchel wasn’t large, it had carried enough food to last Shichi for several days. He started slowly, eating only a few handfuls throughout the day, allowing his stomach to grow accustomed to digestion. His mind began to clear. He noted the positions of the sun and stars, making his way back towards the river. Only the mountains were cold enough for snow, and the brown earth began to reveal itself as he descended. With the soil came roots, and soon he had foraged a small stock to refill the bag.

The river was a welcome sight. Though the water was chilled, he removed his shoes to wade into its embrace. The current was painfull
The Prophet's Daughter- Chapter 9
Chapter 9- The First Day
“Wake up, sleepy head,” a deep voice whispered, gently nudging Abbie. She lifted her head and yawned. It was still dark outside. She rolled over to look at Andy.
“What are you doing up? It’s too early,” she said, her voice thick with sleep.
“Warped Tour,” he smiled. That was all she needed. She shot up in bed and stretched.
“You got pancakes already?” she asked as she ran her hands through her messy hair and got out of bed.
“You’re good. They’re waiting in the living room when you’re ready. Ashley should be here soon,” Andy explained b
Cindy and the Brownie - CH1Chapter 1

A young male brownie ran along the beams of the old Devry family manor, slipping through the nooks and crannies between the walls of the old house. He clutched an ornate pendant in his arms, roughly half the size of his torso. The delicate silver chain of the pendant was wrapped around his shoulders so that it would not snag on any of the splinters or loose nails.

His dark curly locks bounced around his face as he ran through the narrow space, and he would occasionally shift his grip on the pendant so he could brush his bangs out of his eyes. His clothes consisted of a simple tunic, trousers, and boots. They appeared to have been
Roly-Poly Princess, Chapter 1"Now don’t you fret,” soothed Mom. “As long as you’re sick, I’ll take care of you.”
Gretchen lay in bed. “Thanks Mom,” she coughed, “But I don’t know why I have to eat all of this chocolate.”
“Chocolate’s good when you have the flu, dear. Now, open wide!”
“Mmm, chocolate truffle: my favorite!”
“I got these from your favorite store, and there’s a lot more where that came from.”
Mom stayed by Gretchen’s bed all day, changing the TV channel, fluffing the pillows, and popping chocolates into her little girl’s mouth whenever she wanted.
“W
The Emperor's Find GT 2 (Collab Chapter!)CHAPTER TWO - Collaborative

Osidian bit his lip and gazed down at the tiny being in the cage. She shook violently with sobs, making Osidian feel incredibly uncomfortable. He was never good with children- especially crying children.

He looked at the messenger who was smiling uncontrollably, then he switched his gaze upon the two guards. They were watching the cage with uneasy glances, their hands tightening around their spears.

Osidian looked down at the little woman and sighed heavily. “I don’t want anyone else knowing about this,” he said in a low voice. “Has anyone else seen it?”

The messenger’s smile
Roly-Poly Princess, Chapter 2“Oh my God, is that Gretchen?”
Fiona watched a plump girl crawl out of a car and wave goodbye to her mom. She had a yellow backpack with a pink butterfly sticker on the back.
“It is!” She ran to Gretchen. “Where have you been? It’s been weeks since you were last in school.”
“Oh, Fiona! I had such a terrible flu. Mom told me I couldn’t even think about coming back until I was healthy.”
“Oh.” Fiona got a good look at Gretchen’s pot-belly, sticking out beneath her tight t-shirt. Her jeans stretched around her meaty thighs and hips. “You certainly look…healthy.”
A tyrant's last breathThe pain was great, but she ignored it. All that mattered to her now was that her own son stood above her, ready to end her life without the slightest hesitation. His horn glowed a bright red and his eyes bore a look of great anger. Sombra had won. After all of her hopes, her plans, her belief that things would turn out, all she had done was delayed the inevitable. Imprisoning him a thousand years ago hadn't stopped him, nor had his defeat at the Crystal Empire when he was free. She had failed to stop him completely, and now she was about to pay the price.

"Well mother......any last words?"

In truth, there were many things she wanted to say
Small Problems Ch.11 (USUK)"Mornin' Arti-" Alfred froze when his fingers felt only the pillow. "Artie?! Where the hell are ya?!" He was scared to move, though, not wanting to accidentally crush him.

Arthur was instantly startled awake. "Huh- I'm here, Alfred." he called out, groaning as he slowly stretched.

"W-Where?!"

"By your legs. In the corner."

Alfred blinked and glanced down. "What the hell?!"

"I-I may have fallen asleep there..." Arthur mumbled.

"Why- how?!"

Arthur shifted slightly. "Well, I couldn't fall asleep for a while..."

"...And?!"

"And nothing. I was looking out the window for a while and fell asleep there. Nothing happened."

"...Wh...Fine, wel
EyelessJackxReader Story 2 part 1 One YearIt was a year since you meet Jack and he had saved your life as your mother said. It had been one year since Jeff admitted he was in love with you as well. It had been one year since you and Jack was dating. Everything happened one year ago…
It was a beginning of a new summer. You were outside in your favorite expensive summer dress with you cold glass of water. You were stretched out on your deck. You were drawing one of your original characters you have. Jack came beside you.
“Hey there angel,” He said. You jumped a little not noticing him at first. You glanced at him and blushed
“Hey Jack.” You smiled at him
MaskyxReaderxHoodie part 6 Old DanceThe both of you planted a kiss on each other before entering the house. Hoodie opened the door as he grabbed your hand. Masky was right in front of you guys. You blinked at Masky who arms were crossed. You could feel his negative energy he was giving you…you could tell he was mad. You let go of Hoodie’s hand and hugged him
“Thanks..” You whispered. “You helped me regain my memory…” You kissed his mask and went on the empty couch and lay down as you were falling asleep. Masky blushed from under his mask as he watched fall to sleep. Once Masky and Hoodie knew you were full asleep. Masky glared at Hoo
A fading shadowAs she stood there, staring up at that old wooden door, Rainbow hesitated. For those who knew her, hesitation was something that was very much against how she usually was. But on this day, she made an exception. This particular tower of the Canterlot royal palace was not as attractive on the inside as the rest of the building, owing largely to it's purpose of holding criminals. The walls were darker, colder than the other rooms, and the whole place was just largely unpleasant. She focused on this because it didn't seem right for her to be here.

But Rainbow knew that she would have to address this. If she didn't, she'd regret it for the rest
The Prophet's Daughter- Chapter 10
Chapter 10- Bryan Stars
“Hi guys!” a tall man in a blue t-shirt with short, curly blond hair greeted them as the trio walked into the room. He looked from Abbie to Andy with a questioning tint to his eyes, but Andy quickly distracted him.
“Hi Bryan,” Andy greeted, sitting on a green couch next to him.
“Hello there Bryan Starzzzz!” Ashley exclaimed, sitting next to Bryan on the other side, sandwiching Bryan and leaving Abbie seatless. She looked from Andy to Ashley, then settled on Andy’s lap. Abbie stared at a man with curly, brown hair that fell to just about his shoulders and wore purple bunny ears
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After a long wait, a new story chapter in MU BETA EPSILON. The girls of Mu Beta Epsilon combine staggering intelligence with equally drastic loneliness. Tired of watching men go off with busty, sexy women, they take a challenge to find a way, ANY way short of radical surgery to change their plain forms into knockout bodies! But as each woman finds her fantasy through science, magic, or just plain luck, will her dream body bring more trouble than triumph?

This chapter introduces Jordan, an astronomy student and secret UFO nut. By chance and design she gets the close encounter of her dreams... but the event proves both less and far, far more than she ever dared to dream...

More writing will depend on donations- this is very much going to be a for-profit enterprise. A link is at the end of the story- or just Google Superboobs Online...
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Critique by ~cieva3 Nov 29, 2012, 10:16:05 PM
I enjoyed this story. It was very well written, and a credit to both your writing style and your grasp of vocabulary. The Green Lantern expy was what sold it for me, though; There are a number of interesting places you could go from that beginning. I also was pleased by the fact that you decided to begin a central plot-line to this portion of the Bet series; with the rest of the entries possibly only standing together, with nothing extemporaneous to bring to the story except the protagonists, this entry allows for a greater narrative. Very nice.

However, you allowed yourself to be caught in the Star Trek Trap; that of non-interference. This wasn't justified by the rest of the narrative, and both of the alien characters came off as being arrogant in their "superiority", as well as unnecessary for the storyline, when the absence of such a detail would not have diminished the quality of the story in the least.
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